paulherrin
Well-known member
for most of the individual shots i think it was great, but my point was about continuity and the overall thing. in a short trailer, it may be acceptable - but imagine 45 minutes or more of just slow motion. true, there will be some interesting shots, but it makes more mundane scenes plain tiresome. i counted, and there's a total of 10 shots which are not slow-motion, two of which are timelapses at the beginning and end (which by the way are particularly effective, namely because they are limited and open and close the film). but that may account for something like 1% of it at normal speed. in my personal preference, that's distracting and a bit overdone. i don't need to see every kickflip and 360 flip and nosestall in slow motion. some of these shots were great, and really needed to be in slow motion, and i was so glad that they were. others, not so much. seeing something in slow motion puts emphasis and attention on movement, much like italics or boldface type. however, when you write an entire essay in italics or bold, it does not hold the same effect. it becomes the norm, blends together, and it's not so special anymore. slow motion is a powerful and effective technique, but it can be overused to the point where it becomes either redundant or simply uninteresting, except on a shot-by-shot basis. personally, i would recommend reserving it for the more epic sequences to place emphasis.
i say all this to be constructive. i'm not bashing on this work, because i do like it overall. i simply think it has potential to be more effective and stunning in some areas. i'm not saying you must redo the entire thing, but i think it's something good to keep in mind as you continue to produce excellent work. just my own taste - and i like pepperoni pizza. all that extra stuff gets in the way of tasting the pizza.
i say all this to be constructive. i'm not bashing on this work, because i do like it overall. i simply think it has potential to be more effective and stunning in some areas. i'm not saying you must redo the entire thing, but i think it's something good to keep in mind as you continue to produce excellent work. just my own taste - and i like pepperoni pizza. all that extra stuff gets in the way of tasting the pizza.