Scott Crawley
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I'm curious which shots are bothering you with their framing? I know that theres a shot of a woman entering the venue, but she wasn't the subject, the tuxedo she's carrying was the focus, so her head was cut off at the top. Is that one of the shots you were talking about?
Yup. I'm thinking there were other ways to accentuate the tux without the unfortunate decapitation. The first, most obvious thought was to shoot from the other side, or ask her to throw it over the other shoulder. A looser frame with more tux and less of her backside might have been more pleasing.
The other is the shot of the dress immediately following. From what we can see of her, the lady is quite attractive. Even with her face fully framed the dress would still dominate, and a frame full of pretty girl with a wedding dress is better than one of a dress and a trailer.
I mean no offense. If this was a live event, maybe you did the best you could. If it were staged, then I would be more critical. Since I am only guessing, suffice it to say there is room for improvement in those two.