Karim D. Ghantous
Well-known member
Overall I would give you two thumbs up.
The music was tiresome, but I cannot hold you accountable for it. It's just a matter of taste. I understand you reason for using shorter focal lengths, but I don't think it worked. Using shorter lenses makes the film look like locations and budgets were constrained. Wide-angles are basically a cheap workaround for shooting in tight spaces. Looking at it on a computer monitor is distracting enough, never mind a big cinema screen. If you're going to use wides, don't make it obvious IMHO. If I were to see the film I might have a different opinion.
Shots with shorter focal lengths can give presence to the action, but it's a fine line. The opening shots in Pulp Fiction may have been filmed with shorter lenses (though I still haven't seen the complete film!).
The music was tiresome, but I cannot hold you accountable for it. It's just a matter of taste. I understand you reason for using shorter focal lengths, but I don't think it worked. Using shorter lenses makes the film look like locations and budgets were constrained. Wide-angles are basically a cheap workaround for shooting in tight spaces. Looking at it on a computer monitor is distracting enough, never mind a big cinema screen. If you're going to use wides, don't make it obvious IMHO. If I were to see the film I might have a different opinion.
Shots with shorter focal lengths can give presence to the action, but it's a fine line. The opening shots in Pulp Fiction may have been filmed with shorter lenses (though I still haven't seen the complete film!).