Alex Atkinson
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I think all this crossing the line stuff is just common sense. cuts need to feel right smooth transitions, beats 
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Come on now! Acting is great, but this edit is not competent and camera blocking/lighting etc are totally sub par, even by student film standards. You break rules for a reason, not just to be "creative".
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I did consider the cut to be fairly distracting, not just for the line jumps, but some of the jumps in performance/expressions/audio, etc...though a second watch and more intent focus on the dialogue and facial expressions yielded something to enjoy. Those head slams were very realistic!
You may not want to go back and touch the footage, but it may be worth your while to tidy up the cut and flip the young guy's shots, just to see if staying on the same line smoothes things out somewhat. I personally think it'd be worth it, because there are lots of great expressions and performance bits in there...sucks to have those elements overshadowed by technical issues.
On a side note, I like the idea behind the Legendary Scenes group...getting together to shoot mini scenes, coming away with some gems without the effort or cost of pulling together a proper short...good to keep exercising the muscles and technique.
Cheers,
Clint