Spec Commercial - Shot on Sony before I purchased Dragon

[Ryan Sheets]

Wanted to get some thoughts. Shot this with a director in a day and a half in crazy rain.

https://vimeo.com/133513425

Be nice to always be learning and see how to improve.

Thanks!

 

[Chris McKechnie]

Not bad...grade looked good. Just a thought with the concept...maybe only the show the truck with that beautiful wide shot you have of it driving down the road...then all the b-roll of him surfing...then the last shot is him packing up/loading his truck? Or maybe even a shot from the truck as it's watching him surf. Maybe you don't have that content to play with in the edit, just thought it may give it some more mystery until the very end.

Good work though. I think the weather helped make the spot.

 

[Ryan Sheets]

Hey Chris,

Thanks for the feedback.

We are all finished editing and don't have some of what you mentioned but I like hearing what someone else might have done. It's good to keep in mind for future projects for sure.

Appreciate it!

Ryan