SONY FX3 RAW Short - Feedback Please

[Raphael_Carpenter]

Recently I shoot this short film with Sony FX3 and SLRMagic MicroPrime lenses.
Feedback please

 

[Karim D. Ghantous]

Pretty good! Lovely, clean, natural colour. I didn't listen to the audio though. Is the kitten actually white or off white?

 

[Raphael_Carpenter]

Hi Karim, thx for your feedback. the cat is white indeed

 

[Peter Moretti]

In all honesty the intro footage feels out of place, like a generic open and confuses me as to what I'm about to watch. I would consider removing most of it. I suggest opening with the Raphdoll Cattery title card, cut to the kitten being weighed and then to "Hello, I'm Lucky..."

JMHO, I hope it is helpful. Good luck and thank you for sharing!