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[Mark Collins]

http://vimeo.com/10993683

So, this is a project I did for my Visual Aesthetics class. I found it turned out alright, not good but passable. So, I'm just wondering what you guys think of it and how I could improve my work. I did shoot this on film, on the Fuji F-125T stock using the Arri SR2.

So, let me know what you think and offer suggestions on how to improve

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TaMlAkSVSJw

There's the youtube link as it's come to my attention that there's some compression issues with Vimeo

 

[Grinner Hester]

Focus on lighting. It felt like everything I saw was using just natural light.
Don't discard the power of color correction/creation.

 

[michael zaletel]

Coffee cup shot and close ups of hands are excellent. Guy on bleachers also excellent.

-michael zaletel

 

[Mark Collins]

Focus on lighting. It felt like everything I saw was using just natural light.
Don't discard the power of color correction/creation.

It was all natural lighting. Because of the way I had to shoot it (guerrilla, run and gun style) with me being the entire crew, and weather and everything, I had no choice but to go all natural light.

 

[Grinner Hester]

I hear ya. You can always treat it in post though. You have more control there than anywhere. Don't look at it as color correction. Look at it as color creation.