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  • Hey all, just changed over the backend after 15 years I figured time to give it a bit of an update, its probably gonna be a bit weird for most of you and i am sure there is a few bugs to work out but it should kinda work the same as before... hopefully :)

Feed my sheep

I like your location, and the staging and the camera work takes good advantage. My notes: 1. Acting is too direct, needs stronger subtext. They are presenting with emphasis, but I don't see them connecting the dots before they speak. 2. Use more images to tell the story. ie hand picking up rocks, insert on hand on holding rock, use of reflections, silhouette. 3. Preserve more reactions in editing. When something happens, show the thought before and after the event. Anticipation, event, reaction.

Zach
 
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