fashion nude editorial - think i need CC experts suggestions

[paolo baroni]

this is my last video editorial, first with a neked girl
i did color in speed grade to try the software……i like it but for masks -power wind- davinci is better….anyway i finished it in adobe because i had to deliver final product
colorists if u have an opinion share it please
ciao

http://vimeo.com/83250378




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scarlet 4k 24fps, zeiss 21-35-50-100

 

[dio Zafi]

the black and white was done with adobe ???

 

[Brandon Obey]

Whatever look you have going on at the 00:27 is dope. I would use that along with the black and white. My only suggestion would be on the wide shots to add more contrast to the body. You have great contrast on the close-ups of the face particularly her lips it would be great if you could get the same amount of contrast on the medium wide shots of her body.- This would make her body stand out and give you more of a vivid feel.

- my 2 cents

 

[paolo baroni]

dio zafi edit and color all adobe cc

 

[paolo baroni]

yes brandon i feel some inconsistency too but the problem is that i can't reach same level of contrast i think is the lens wide shots are 21mm f2,8 the rest is f1.4 so i think even if stopped down to 4 or to 6.4 there is a difference even same set of lenses
thanx 4 tips

 

[BRANDON JAMESON]

The work is beautiful.
May I suggest a light pass in BeautyBox3 on the close-ups?

 

[paolo baroni]

brendan J i will have a look now, cause i don't know the plugin
thnx