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Delicious Dessous - sexy lingerie short

A bit long and repetitious but done in good taste and with good technique.
 
Maybe You're right. I can always easily make a 30sec ad spot of it, but wanted to make kinda 1.5 min long short, I like it , since it have a variety of scenes, 3 locations, ideas.
 
Seems like Dragon sensor was made for shooting with your lighting style here.
 
well done...i guess if it is that long, it would need a couple of changes/more outfits....
more DR is always welcome but the highlights need to be blown for this anyway....noticed a problem i have had before....dirty windows:) and dragon would show even more of that....
 
i think the length is fine, I just think that the models had a few too many moves. I think their undulations and motions are the reason that it may feel repetitive. I'd rather see them looking a little more naturally comfortable. The images are great and the look works, but the directing isn't my favorite.
 
Paul: dirty windows is a part of the look;)
Justin: I'm agree with You. The model is a photomodel, that's the reason why she's moving too much - she's trying to posture many good looking poses, which is not useful in a fashion short like that...
 
Nice shots, color palette and overall aesthetic.

Few technical suggestions:
- Text is positoned on top of foliage and with transparent background is less readable. Slightly higher opacity of the text box might help, if you prefer that shot for this purpose and that position of the text.
- In edit try to finish the shot, there are a few cuts with unfinished action, whether rack focusing or model's action, which are undefined and tend to be confusing to the viewer.
 
thanks for the tips. I'm rather a beginner, the R1MX (which I own for 2 months now) is my first pro camera.
 
i like the edit actually.. but i think the music is very flat. sometimes trying with something else may give a whole new impression.
 
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