1 Minute Spot for Clothing Line (kinda safe for work)

[Nathanial Stuart]

Hey Guys, new to the forum and this is my first shoot with my Epic M waiting on my dragon upgrade. This was shot using an angineaux 30-80mm and in 4k check it out tell me what you think. https://vimeo.com/104666177

 

[Justin McAleece]

There are definitely some good shots there and undoubtedly sexy girls! I feel like some of the slider shots were a little redundant though and that a lot of the lighting was a bit flat and lifeless for me. I could've done with some heavy backlighting or more sunshine elements or something like that to kinda liven it up. I also felt like the build up to the girls doing the back flip into the water kind of led to not much because we are left looking at sort of a bland sky with hints of splashes coming up and that's about it. I feel like you could've done more with that moment.

A lot of it looks great! But those are my attempts at some helpful notes from what I saw. Thanks for posting.

 

[Nathanial Stuart]

The designer herself wanted a flat 70's style look so i didn't really go to crazy with grading if anything i flattened the image even more. Thanks for your input!

 

[Justin McAleece]

That's as good a reason as any! Keep up the good work.