5D REEL PLEASE CHECK

[Will Keir]

yeah bro, lose the shot at the end, the one of the girl, it doesn't even look that good, editing error? I also agree, too many stops, maybe you can thin in down a bit, show your best one always over your best three or four.

I like the shot going behind the grass paper, seemed to have a Japanese feel to it.

Keep up the good work my brother!

 

[Mohamed Younis]

yeah bro, lose the shot at the end, the one of the girl, it doesn't even look that good, editing error? I also agree, too many stops, maybe you can thin in down a bit, show your best one always over your best three or four.

I like the shot going behind the grass paper, seemed to have a Japanese feel to it.

Keep up the good work my brother!

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I did most of what you said already. I'll upload a new version soon.

 

[Mohamed Younis]

Looks pretty good. I would say the RED footage is either that stuff with the car or from some of those shots at the end. The one of the man walking down the road looked good. Am I close?

You are right. They are the shots at the end. Great guess.