Rate it please

[Mikki_Vince]

Hello, my name is Mikki, I am from Russia. (so sorry for my bad english)

I'm new, tightly engaged footage a month ago.
I would like to show you my first two clips:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HeTxkyQTwK0&feature=player_embedded

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9jzoPUT3xoU

 

[Mikki_Vince]

that no one will show an error?

 

[Mikki_Vince]

so what do you think?

 

[Robert Aldrich]

so what do you think?

Hey Mikki,

You've probably got the wrong audience here, scooters are not the most manly form of transportation at least in the USA...

You've got some good editing and title design there, and a good attempt at a story in the second one.

I don't think anyone wanted to be rude to your first effort, and that's probably why you didn't get a response. In the second video, you've got a bit of an actual story going there, so good!

It's fun and satisfying to actually master getting the shot, but story is king!

Robert

 

[Martin Weiss]

Mikki; reduser is a forum for professional users of RED digital cinemas. Posts like yours - while I understand your enthusiasm - really only add to the general noise.